Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Persuasive Writing ( Olympics )


Competitors at the Olympics need to be honest


I think that people in the Olympics need to be honest because it’s gonna  be rubbish games if they cheat


Firstly, if you don’t be honest you’ll get disqualified and if you're on the podium and in first place but  you don’t deserve it because you're cheating, you’ll feel how bad it is to be booed.

Secondly, if people are cheating it's not fair for other countries  and competitors. Competitors try their best.

Thirdly,these games are for fun and giving people a challenge and to help make New Zealand happy because if people don’t be honest you will make your country mad or sad.




In conclusion please be fair and honest for your country and yourself. Make your country happy, don’t cheat you and your country will be banned.

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