2 copied poems

Xbox, Xbox,

you’re the one for me.

I also love my 3DS

and my Nintendo Wii.

GameCube, GameBoy,

Apple iPod Touch.

I never thought that I would ever

be in love this much.

Pac-Man, Sonic,

Mario, and Link.

Your names are etched inside my mind

in everlasting ink.

Run, jump, flip, hang,

double-jump, and climb.

That’s all I want to do

with every second of my time.

This is true love.

Yes, it’s plain to see.

Xbox, Xbox,

will you marry me?

What I like about it

Alliteration

Small Lines

Capitals for Names

Capitals and Full stops

I’m digging for diamonds.

I’m digging for gold.

I’m digging for silver

that’s shiny and cold.

I’m digging all day and

I’m digging all night.

I’m digging for rubies

all sparkling and bright.

I plan to get famous.

I plan to get rich

by digging up gemstones

in ditch after ditch.

And yet, from these ditches

I’ve dug in the ground,

there weren’t any diamonds

or coins to be found.

I haven’t got silver

or rubies, you see…

I just have my mom and dad

yelling at me.

For though I found nothing

from digging till dawn,

my parents found holes

where we once had a lawn.

What I like about it

Different sentence starter

Short Sentences

Full Stops And capitals