Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Persuasive Writing ( Olympics )


Competitors at the Olympics need to be honest


I think that people in the Olympics need to be honest because it’s gonna  be rubbish games if they cheat


Firstly, if you don’t be honest you’ll get disqualified and if you're on the podium and in first place but  you don’t deserve it because you're cheating, you’ll feel how bad it is to be booed.

Secondly, if people are cheating it's not fair for other countries  and competitors. Competitors try their best.

Thirdly,these games are for fun and giving people a challenge and to help make New Zealand happy because if people don’t be honest you will make your country mad or sad.




In conclusion please be fair and honest for your country and yourself. Make your country happy, don’t cheat you and your country will be banned.

Thursday, August 4, 2016

narrative

Topic:robots              

                                                                                                                                                                          

Robots are machines that work from power and will do whatever the creator tells them to. The Creator used lots of tools like hammers, nails, drills, chainsaws and much more. The robot could be a cleaner, rubbish bin,helper and recycle bot. They could be made out of metal,stone and all sorts. Sometimes the robot can break down and they will need to reboot. The Creator will reboot the robot and the robot won't remember many things because it's doing what it has to do and trying to remember just like Wall-e. Wall-e is a recycle bot he used to have lots of friends until storms came and destroyed them. Wall-e  he can make piles of recycling. Robots can gain strength and accomplish new missions just like Eve-a  and  we all like robots I hope but I love robots . They are my favourite machines that's why I will be a mechanic and build lots of robots and  all sorts. I can even be a robot I have done this since I was little. I used to love them. Fizz, buzz clatter clatter it goes.